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Posted By: Kuzma, 09-26-2016, 09:55 AM

Some of my studio works.




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09-26-2016, 10:31 AM   #2
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Nice shots, capturing black on black is not easy.

As a musician I find the hard shadow edge on the soundboard of the guitar a distraction and it jars with me. Was this caused by a reflector/barn door perhaps? It could be fairly difficult to remove in PP but might be worth a try.
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Ditto on the guitar. Very nice light on the face and hands, nice separation from the background, I know this is not easy. Pose 2 is the nicer IMHO
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Prefer the profile shot by far. On the shadows on the guitar; if too difficult to process them out, would a crop be a viable option? Do you need to show the whole instrument to for the image to communicate the message?

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Beautiful black & white photography. Well done.

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Crop the second one just below the head of the guitar on the third fret or so and you have a winner! All the issues with the guitar go away.
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Thanks, guys, for your comments! Yes, this shadow looks really bad. I will try to reduce it.

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