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I'm not quite understanding your sharpen steps - 60% 20 pixels 1 theshold? If so, I'm thinking you're overdoing it there. I'd suggest <20% and >20 pixels, though the pixels will vary depending on image. And I might hold off on this until after I've converted, though experimentation either way may prove this a better time. Why do you believe you need this?
Ditto for the smart sharpen, I'd keep the pixels to .2 or .3, and I'd save this step for last.
Then you rush through the main bit, the B&W conversion. How are you converting? There are many many alternatives, I've described a very flexible method here somewhere... but essentially, are you at least doing a channel mixer layer?
I'd recommend doing that layer, then underneath it do the other stuff, because now you can see the effects on your b&w end result. Apart from the curves and sharpening, you can add layers to intensify, saturate or shift colors underneath, either all colors or selected colors (Tri-X tended to shift the green values for example). And while doing this, look out for both highlights and shadows, you want to make sure the extremes where you want to retain detail aren't blown/dropped.
To my eyes you've pumped up the contrast a bit too much, and at the same time lost some of the shifts in light/tone in the B&W conversion.
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