Originally posted by JMR 
...................I very much like the concept of 'caught', the leaves caught amid the white streaks representing the water in motion. But you are employing what is called a 'centre of interest' or the 'principle of dominance.' These principles apply both to photography and art in general. In my opinion, there is not enough in this centre of interest to hold your attention, or to warrant a photo on the wall.
Just my thoughts.
JMR
I have to disagree with you on that one JMR. The focal point is well positioned according to the rule of thirds and much of the rest of the picture is the moving water emanating out from the focal point.
