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11-25-2015, 06:35 PM - 1 Like   #1
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The vertical lines chop this into a tryptic. That's not a bad thing, but you have to make sure that all 3 sections have something worth seeing. I think you've got interesting things there, but the overall height of the composition is a bit of a problem.
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QuoteOriginally posted by aoibhinnditori Quote
I've never really considered having my photography critiqued before, but I'm looking to improve and learn more.
The exposure is spot on in my opinion, and things are really sharp, I like the mix of gloom and light! I like the vertical lines for the composition, the background... I'm not sure? Could be worth exploring other vantages to frame in the V.
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