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Old 11-14-2007, 02:15 PM   #1
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Old 11-15-2007, 05:52 AM   #2
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Nice shot; I wouldn't change a thing.
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Old 11-15-2007, 09:47 AM   #3
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Nice! My only quibble is with where it's focused, on the seeds around the edge. That strikes me as being at odds with the "focus" of the image, which I assume you mean to be the isolated seed and plume. My instinct (quite possibly wrong!) would be to focus on that isolated plume, or possibly the seed it's attached to. I don't think the rest of the seedhead would be so out of focus as to be unrecognizable or distracting. It's a really nice shot, nevertheless, and I really like the muted palette.

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Old 11-15-2007, 10:18 AM   #4
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All I can say is Oh My! Stunning capture, and unlike Julie I like where the focus is, as it leads to a more ephemeral feeling for the isolated seed. I can't think of anything I would change with this one.

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Old 11-15-2007, 10:36 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by J.Scott View Post
Nice shot; I wouldn't change a thing.
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All I can say is Oh My! Stunning capture, and unlike Julie I like where the focus is, as it leads to a more ephemeral feeling for the isolated seed. I can't think of anything I would change with this one.
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