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Old 11-29-2007, 06:36 PM   #1
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waiting for the bus

shot this a couple of weeks ago while waiting for my bus. i like the contrast in surface and the texture of both surfaces.

but the main reason to shoot were the intersecting curves.

comments and suggestions welcome as usual.

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Old 11-29-2007, 06:40 PM   #2
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No critique here. I love abstract shots like this. Well done!
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Old 11-29-2007, 07:00 PM   #3
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Great shot. I love the contrast between the curves of the building on the right and the straight edges on the left ... but wait it curves too. It also nice you were able to keep extraneous details/subjects from creeping in.
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Old 11-29-2007, 07:14 PM   #4
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yes, i love the curve at the top of the brick wall. it was built in the late 1890s as the city jail.

there was a street light at the bottom i cropped.
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Old 11-30-2007, 06:26 AM   #5
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Well done. It's so cool when you see great shots in the things we see every day.
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Old 12-02-2007, 04:12 AM   #6
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yer, i would have to agree with the others, nice shot mate.. came up well! its a good contrast
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Old 12-02-2007, 07:55 AM   #7
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I also like the shot. The contrast of the 2 surfaces and the curves makean interesting composition. I would crop on the sides more to make the curves stand out even more. It is good in B&W as well.
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