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12-17-2007, 09:41 PM
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Took this with a K1000 with a 70-210 zoom, Vivitar. Don't know what the settings were as I took it a few years ago. It's the shrimp docks of Hilsborough Bay in Tampa, FL. The boat's name just caught me. It was taken from my boat, not from shore. So what do you think? Comments, Critique please.
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08-05-2008, 04:47 AM
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I don't think it works that well to have older boats, and the the ferry in the background. The subject needs more isolation
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08-05-2008, 06:42 AM
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I would crop in as well and maybe give a little tweak in WB. Unless you arre working towards the old fashion photo shot. Love the name of the boat
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08-05-2008, 07:03 AM
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I second the comment on reworking the white balance.
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08-05-2008, 12:09 PM
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Here it is recropped. WB is a little tricky on my equipment. All my monitors and profiles are geared to color correcting for a cmyk world not rgb.
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