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06-07-2008, 11:02 PM
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This has nothing to do with your technique (maybe) but the wide eyes distract me. The light reflection to the right does the same. I'd prefer just a smidge more DOF so that all of her hair would be in focus. God, I'm a grouchy son of a gun tonight, aren't I? Sorry.
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06-08-2008, 08:51 PM
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Good model, her personality really shines, bad background.
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06-15-2008, 02:02 AM
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I hope you meant 'spur of the moment' ... eeuuww
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06-15-2008, 02:05 AM
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Nice pleasant shot - she has a happy face.
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06-15-2008, 02:54 AM
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Nicely composed,and going by the facial expression you are in luck LOL
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