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06-15-2008, 06:05 PM
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Pillow Fight & Bubble Battle
i'm going to put these photos in the "photo critique" section vs the "post your photos" section because i kinda need some help how to improve them :P but please don't rip me a new a$$hole?! :P
considering i still suck i think they're ok, but I'm having a rough time getting really rich colors and clarity. 1A:  1B:  1C:  1D:  2A:  2B:  2C:  couple more photos are on my site if you want to see, I didn't want to over flood this post with all of them  Pillow Fight | PeterMorawski.com Bubble Battle | PeterMorawski.com |
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06-16-2008, 11:55 AM
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Well Pete, you gotta to have vibrant colours in order to get vibrant colours. The last 2 shots have the colours but the others don't have any so don't expect it especially with that dull sky over Nathan Phillips.
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06-16-2008, 01:17 PM
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i guess i mean having the colors pop more, not really having purples and yellows in each shot. they just don't seem as sharp as i've seen other photos.
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07-17-2008, 11:57 PM
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What lens are you using? I get these kind of results with my crapola sigma kit lens. I really like teh big bubble shot and the pillow on the ground floor.
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07-18-2008, 09:23 PM
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I would increase the contrast on the first three, at least.
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07-18-2008, 09:27 PM
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I agree with SpecialK on the contrast, and would even go a step further and fiddle with the shadows and highlights.
The bubble ones look good to me though
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