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Old 07-26-2008, 03:29 PM   #1
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Mystic Yard repost with image

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Old 08-05-2008, 04:01 AM   #2
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This doesn't really do it for me. Maybe too abstract, could work for others
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Old 08-05-2008, 06:10 AM   #3
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If your were going for the pen and ink look, you nailed it.
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Old 08-05-2008, 09:57 AM   #4
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kewl, i like it.
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Old 08-06-2008, 08:16 PM   #5
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I like everything except what appear to be the rocks in the lower right. They appear a bit too garrish for my tastes.
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Old 08-06-2008, 11:14 PM   #6
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I like the style. It has a similar feel and color to the other shot of yours (knife, chili and friends). But I feel that it have too many elements competing for attention. The blank space at the left also seem quite unbalanced. If you can somehow lose the big rock, it may look better compositionally. As a garden designer I can see how in person this would've been a nice garden composition, though.
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