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11-16-2008, 03:14 PM   #1
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Robin

I'm bodered by the leaves, But rubbing them out does make things better.

K10D with the DA* 300/4

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11-16-2008, 03:57 PM   #2
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This is what I would call an amazing shot. The bird is not only there, it is doing something and I can even see what she's thinking: great flowers!
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11-16-2008, 06:05 PM   #3
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nice work!!
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11-16-2008, 06:15 PM   #4
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I like the image. The leaf can be a problem if you are in a competition. How about cropping just belwo the left side foot and you can still retain two flowers. Nice, all the same.

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11-17-2008, 01:00 PM   #5
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great colours, great composition, great moment... that's all you need for great shot, and that's exactly what you have got here.
well done...
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11-17-2008, 03:27 PM   #6
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A all over superb shot


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11-17-2008, 06:42 PM   #7
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I like this picture because of the focus on the bird. you even have a catch light in the eye. great colors
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11-19-2008, 04:09 PM   #8
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This is a fantastic shot too. Well done!
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11-28-2008, 11:14 PM   #9
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Beautiful, shows off the bokeh of this lens at f4.5, focus is spot on, it should be easy to clone the leaf out, what a nice nice shot.
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11-29-2008, 03:51 AM   #10
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This is simply stunning shot. Beautiful framing and texture
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11-29-2008, 11:53 AM   #11
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Thanks for the compliments!!

A few days ago this picture was selected not only for the PPG but also in the Pentax Premiere collection.

It makes me really proud!!


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11-29-2008, 12:58 PM   #12
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er, all I can say is...

wow!
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11-29-2008, 01:01 PM   #13
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I am not surprised at all this was picked for PPG's premium photo line up.. Everything works with this photo and is a great sales pitch for the Pentax 300. Has pentax release a teleconverter for this lens? JIMBO
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11-30-2008, 01:09 AM   #14
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Has pentax release a teleconverter for this lens?
Not yet Jimbo, the 1.4 sdm should be released in next spring.
I mostly use a hide so I do not need the converter for these litle garden birds.
My working distance is between 2 and 3 meters.

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