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02-04-2009, 05:01 PM   #1
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ISO: 200   Aperture: F8   Shutter Speed: 1/250s   Camera: K100d Super   Focal Length: 180mm   

Taken in Cuba, any critiques welcome, good or bad

Thanks

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02-04-2009, 08:49 PM   #2
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I like this image. I would have liked it even more if you could have seen more of the faces.

My 2 cents worth,

Ray
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02-05-2009, 08:00 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by sawtooth235 View Post
I like this image. I would have liked it even more if you could have seen more of the faces.

My 2 cents worth,

Ray
Thank you for your comments.

How about PP, do you think there's something to be improved?
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02-05-2009, 07:24 PM   #4
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I like the PP, It’s not easy to balance a white dress with that dark skin.

I also like the faces just as they are. They leave the viewer to assign their personal mood the photo.

The only thing I would change is the crop. I find the corner of the building a bit distracting. Here is my take on the crop:


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02-06-2009, 03:54 PM   #5
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Thank you joe.
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02-06-2009, 08:41 PM   #6
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I really like this shot to. I would have cropped closer to the top of there heads. Maybe left an inch or so above them. Just me though. Great work
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