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04-19-2009, 02:43 PM   #1
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Forever
ISO: 100   Aperture: F4.5   Shutter Speed: 1/150s   Camera: K10D   Focal Length: 100   

A few weeks before the actual wedding I had the chance to take some pics form the wedding rings!

Any critique?

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04-19-2009, 03:14 PM   #2
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I know nothing about jewelery photography but I don't like the green background...

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04-19-2009, 08:01 PM   #3
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Re: Forever

I also like the green background. Precise focusing.

Good work.

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04-19-2009, 09:14 PM   #4
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I think it would be better if both rings were fully in the frame and it was taken from a more 'straight on' perspective.
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04-20-2009, 10:49 AM   #5
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engravings are always nice to have in focus as well, perhaps a larger depth of field. then again I'm not a wedding photographer
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04-20-2009, 12:51 PM   #6
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Thx all for your input.

I'm not a weddingfotographer its my first one. I made 4 different photos from the rings. this pic was a bit unusual thats why I posted it here. maybe wise to post the other pics aswel.

The reason parts off the lowest ring were left of was because the picture is made on a mirror. The double image off both rings was distracting and not nice at all.

The color is a bit daring the other shots are from the more romantic typ.

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04-20-2009, 06:21 PM   #7
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Guido, a black non reflective background usually works best for those kind of shots. A mirror behind instead of below could have made an interesting image.
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