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10-04-2009, 11:25 AM   #1
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Bever Dam
ISO: 400   Aperture: F8   Shutter Speed: 1/350s   Camera: K10D   Focal Length: 35mm   

I"m not much of a landscape photographer, but I was intrigued by the natural framing and leading lines of this perspective. Does it work? What do you think of the processing (colour/contrast, etc)?

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10-04-2009, 04:38 PM   #2
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You've done a really good job capturing the beauty of the scenery. It's well exposed, evenly lit, and very pretty to look at. You're right also about the natural curves of the scene leading your eye to a certain point. Unfortunately, there isn't really any subject at that point, just what looks to be a dam or a bridge, hard to make out. So in that aspect, it falls a little short. But as just a landscape, even if a little plain and busy, I think it's very good looking.
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10-09-2009, 09:24 PM   #3
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I like it, too. My only suggestion would be a slight crop from the left to get the dam slightly off the center line.
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10-09-2009, 09:27 PM   #4
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Ole, I like your suggestion of the crop but maybe on the right side. That fern on the left really helps the image IMO where the right is a little uninteresting. Love the deep colors of the shot that seems to be throughout the image. Well done. JIM
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