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10-06-2009, 09:45 PM   #1
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Mountain of Color
ISO: 200   Aperture: F8   Shutter Speed: 1/125s   Camera: PENTAX K-7   Focal Length: 39mm   



Dixie National Park, Utah - the fall colors were stunning.

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10-06-2009, 10:40 PM   #2
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First thought: absolutely gorgeous colour.
Stands out brilliantly.
Well captured and processed.
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10-06-2009, 11:18 PM   #3
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Just a bunch of aspens?
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10-07-2009, 12:32 AM   #4
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It's a little flat, I don't see much of a subject here. A lot of divergent lines as well.
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11-13-2009, 07:09 PM   #5
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Hi Ole,

I remember these colors on the hill side - it was phenomenal! No issues with the colors in this shot!

These are first impressions (and sorry for the delay): one thing that struck me is trying to crop a bit off the top and bottom so it balances a little more. The sky doesn't have a lot of clouds to make it more interesting and a little less foreground would possibly pull your eyes up to the colors a bit quicker. By tightening it up a bit, that might do it.

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11-14-2009, 08:24 AM   #6
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Thanks, Marc, I like your suggetsion. And with the tighter crop the focal point/starting point for the eyes becomes more prominent:
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