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11-02-2009, 07:57 PM   #1
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ISO: 100   Aperture: F11   Shutter Speed: 1/2s   Camera: K200   Focal Length: 70mm   

Can't use this in my photog class.
'Cause it's of the twins project and I shot over their backs.
I just loved the way they set up the lighting and I am a fan.
They didn't mind.
I kinda like shot.
What do you think?
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11-12-2009, 08:14 PM   #2
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I remember Dan Petry!
I like the composition, but I think the light on the bill of the cap is too harsh and takes away from the shot a bit.
What about a tighter shot with only parts of the glove and cap along with the ball, or perhaps shoot it outside on the grass from a very low to the ground point of view?

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11-12-2009, 08:32 PM   #3
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Thought we'd seen a similar composition some time ago.
Well, much of the same critique here, as said above - lighting overdone below cap and in foreground of underlying white cloth.
Otherwise quite nicely done.
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