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11-05-2009, 11:08 PM   #1
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B&W& Color again...
ISO: 100   Aperture: F4   Shutter Speed: 1/350s   Camera: K20   Focal Length: 35   

Another experiment with B&W and tone. Comments?

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11-08-2009, 11:54 AM   #2
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Hi Brian. I like the soft tint projected on the wall. But I find the tint in the iron bar on the L kind of distracting. Why not make all of the iron B&W? I also recommend trying to clone or crop out the bit of glass on the upper L. It's a nice image, but not quite "finished" in my opinion.
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11-08-2009, 01:34 PM   #3
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Is this more what you had in mind? Thanks for the input, Brian
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