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Morning mist illustration
Posted by regken, 09-12-2008, 06:10 PM regken is offline

Visited Baxter State park and saw this scene at sunrise. Would love to get some comments on the PP I've done.

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09-12-2008, 06:28 PM   #2
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I like the PP work (image), looks "painted".
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09-12-2008, 07:25 PM   #3
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I'd say pen and ink, watercolor, with some charcoal touches. It works well.
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09-12-2008, 07:46 PM   #4
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Hi Ken, nice work. I might crop a little off the top just to get rid of that small portion of sky if it was me. The golden light on the water and then the mist is beautiful.
I can't make my mind up about the chair. If it was on the end of the jetty near the water it might tell a story but where it is near the tree, I'm not sure whether it works or not.
I would have loved to have been there, you live in a beautiful area.
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09-12-2008, 08:19 PM   #5
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Gary,
As usual you are right about the sky, I'll work on that. here is another shot with the chair being more prominent. I've got about 3 others shot from different angles and can't make up my mind which works better.
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Two nice images there, I like the PP treatment you've done. The two different shots also have a different feel to them, and I think you've chosen two borders that complement that.

Personally, I like the composition in the first one more, but I like the calm, peaceful mood the second one gives; although you've snipped the top off of the tree.
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You cropped out the top of the tree. It looks great apart from that.
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Prefer the second one... but there is alot of interest in the first one. JIMBO
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