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Shot first wedding
Posted by jmbradd, 09-07-2009, 02:37 PM jmbradd is offline

An would like some critique of my post proccessing. I did this as a favor to a friend (well, my mother volunteered me) so being perfect is not really expected but free or not, I like to put my best work out there. I really like this pose but i'm struggling a bit getting it "right".

Post proccessing done:

2 curves adjustment layers, one for red and one for blue as the histogram showed they were under exposed.

I don't remember if I did an unsharp mask but I usually do that near the end.

Any and all comments are welcome!

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09-07-2009, 02:46 PM   #2
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looks nice, but I wonder why you have cut her harm?
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09-07-2009, 02:53 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by devisor View Post
looks nice, but I wonder why you have cut her harm?
it actually wasn't really a posed shot. She was on her way accross the bridge in the background and we decided to take a few pics before she walked to the ceremony. It is regrettable that the arm is cut off but it was the in-camera composition. The previous shot had all of her arm but included people doing crunches in the background (this was at a state park) so I figured this was preferable
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09-07-2009, 07:21 PM   #4
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Not bad.
It's candid and lovely and well framed (apart from her left arm), though it also seems a little over exposed with a harsh off-camera flash. Would have suited HSS and softened light source (or at least turned down slightly), but well done.
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