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Igilligan
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Personal
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900 x 1128 |
| Date Posted |
12-12-2007 11:14 AM |
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| Average Rating |
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Number Of Comments |
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| Title |
The Kingsnake |
| Description |
Outside of the Peacock Lounge in Lower Haight... Trying out my new camera. I thought this was with my Smc M35mm 3.5, But in looking back at the exif: This is with the kit DA18-55 at 18mm 1/4" F3.5 ISO 800. |
| Camera |
K100d |
| Lens |
DA 18-55 |
| Location |
Haight St in San Francisco |
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#1

12-12-2007 12:36 PM
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The Kingsnake
I like how you've framed his head - the light building is in the right spot, I like the inclusion of the street light in the top corner, and the passerby... well if he were just past the face it would be a different composition. Maybe better, but more conventional. Here, I read the passerby as a beard, a continuation of your subject's facial hair. I like that ambiguity, for me that makes the pic. (Of course your subject's very interesting too)
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12-12-2007 03:04 PM
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The Kingsnake
I really like this shot, it looks like you like to do a lot or portrait work, and it shows. I love how there is room in the frame for him to look. I also like the contrast here to make him really stand out and gives me a real 3D feeling. One thing I would suggest is taking it without that blur around his face, I'm guessing that was a person walking. It isn't overly distracting, but I think it would be better without it.
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12-13-2007 06:08 AM
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The Kingsnake
Very cool. The expression realy adds to the photo. The blurred person in the background is a bit distracting but does not take away much from thist photo. I am trying to decide if a tigher crop (from the bottom) would be better , but I like the jacket in the shot.
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istD, K10D, PENTAX AF-540FGZ, F-Remote, BG-2 Battery Grip
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Tamron 28-75 f2.8, 18-250 f3.5-6.3
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12-14-2007 09:48 AM
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The Kingsnake
Nicely done! I agree with the above comments that it would be even better without the blurred shadow under the subject's chin. The expression, composition, and conversion are really nice.
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