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Peter Zack
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[Gallery]
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303.9 KB |
| Category |
Nature
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Original Dimensions |
1590 x 903 |
| Date Posted |
12-14-2007 09:44 PM |
Number Of Views |
227 |
| Average Rating |
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Number Of Comments |
5 |
| Title |
No picnic now! |
| Description |
Winter is coming very early this year. |
| Camera |
k10D |
| Lens |
f 70-210 |
| Location |
Truro Nova Scotia |
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#1

12-14-2007 10:33 PM
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No picnic now!
Very nice framing Peter. It is just like Florida , trees , a picnic table and lots of water (albiet in a more solid state!). Was it a bit overcast ? I think the picnic table was the point of focus ? I really like the fact there are not tracks anywhere. Well cone.
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12-15-2007 09:34 AM
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No picnic now!
I like the framing you have done with the tree as well, but I think there is too much wasted space at the bottom of this one. Move the bench down in the frame, lets get a little more tree, or crop it tighter. The wasted space here, especially since it is just white, kind of distracts and washes out the picture.
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12-15-2007 11:17 AM
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No picnic now!
Nice shot Peter. I like the composition of this shot. For me, the snow in the foreground adds to the lonely, undisturbed, fresh snow feel. The only thing I would like to see is a bit more contrast.
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12-15-2007 11:21 AM
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No picnic now!
I just looked at the full-sized version, and the constrast looks much better, so ignore my comment regarding contrast above. I like the shot!
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12-20-2007 08:05 PM
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No picnic now!
Thanks Dave, Travis and Scott for your thoughts. I was trying to get the isolated lonely look to this shot and felt the open space worked better. I did crop it before posting and decided to return to the original version. As Dave said I felt it worked because there are no footprints in the snow. I do think Scott is right though and the shot does need a touch more contrast to give it a bit more kick. More work to do. Also I want to thank Travis for suggesting the thread. Great idea. I've learned a lot with this one.
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