The upper right is also soft on the 18-55 shot but the tree branches are much denser and that part of the frame is darker in the first shot and it isn't as noticeable. To really do a test right, the camera should have been tripod mounted and the scene should have been the exact same framing with each lens and from the same distance from the subject. These shots really tell us nothing. They were shot from different distances and the light was not the same, Differences in contrast are to be expected as can a slight difference in exposure as the light transmission will not be exactly the same. You might even find these differences in different copies of the same lens. That stuff is easily corrected in PP.
Of course, the OP was certainly within his rights to send the lens back if he wasn't happy with it. As I said, I'm quite happy with my 18-55, it's just not as convenient a walk around length for my uses.
Here are some of my shots from my only (so far) use of the 17-70 at my daughters wedding. I am NOT a wedding photographer and totally out of my comfort zone doing this.
The ceremony was in this room at the Canfield Casino in Saratoga Springs, NY. I came prepared to shoot outside but the snow wasn't cleared out of the gazebo in the park we were supposed to use. Blinding light coming in from a window and I had to squat low to keep all the people behind me out of the mirror. I bounced flash off the ceiling to light the couple. 3 different white balances in this room.
Getting away from those windows, the flash worked much better.
Then it was outside in the snow.
Then to a local pub for the reception. We has the upstairs section. Strange colored lights and more #$@#$ windows!
The lens worked quite well in the 24-28mm range and mostly wide open. This was at 26mm and f/3.5
So far, I'm happy with the lens. The final album will probably have many of my oldest daughters shots as she does quite a bit of event photography. She's a Nikon shooter and I haven't been able to convert her yet.