Your focus is reasonably good, and not much star trailing at 12mm 30 seconds. There's also a small amount of coma distortion visible if I look at the brightest stars in your 2028 pixel version on Flickr. None of that is harming the image; it's all trivial and only other astrophotographers will notice it.
Here's one way to try accentuating the Milky Way. It works best with raw but you can try it on jpg too. I'm using Lightroom terminology but other software has similar features. Apply color noise reduction. There's quite a bit of noise to deal with because it was a hot night. Then raise the white point to bring out more of the Milky Way. Maybe boost shadows. If those prior steps made the sky too gray and lacking contrast, back off a little on the whit or shadows, or reduce the black point. Finish with a small touch of the clarity slider.
Originally posted by torashi If you can make your own Bahtinov mask, it's of great help.
I've only used a Bahtinov with an 8" Schmidt-Cassegrain telescope. Have you had success with ultrawide camera lenses? My expectation is that the spikes would be too faint to see in the viewfinder or liveview.