Nice Job!
Hello RM, Congratulations on the good work with the new camera!
If you don't mind, I'll make a few suggestions;
Looking at the shot data, I see you took three photos in the 50mm-80mm range (# 2,3,5), so my suggestion is to invest in a quality 50mm prime, if you don't already have one. An "M" 50mm f/1.7 or "A" f/1.7 would be perfect, and cost about $100 USD for the M and somewhat more for the A.
Why? Better depth-of-field control. Your shutter speed and ISO are being controlled by the f/22 stop, which may be necessary with a Tele zoom, but with the 50mm prime, you could have sharp focus from 15-20 feet to infinity at f/5.6 or f/8.0 (I'm reading this off my M 50mm, the A may be slightly different).
So, that's three more stops of shutter speed or 3 stops better ISO, a polarizer (about 1-1/2 stops) or some combination.
# 2 and 3 could use a polarizer. It would deepen the blue sky, increase contrast and add realism (sharpen/deepen) the water.
A wider aperture will also help the bokeh, which has a good character but is slighty "busy" or nervous for a scenic shot. This is in reference to the two close-ups, # 4 and 5. Both are good photos, but the tiny bokeh lines and swirls distract from the main subject. Ideally, the bokeh enhances the photo by being soft and indefinite, "dreamy" if you will. Any sharp lines or edges destroy this effect.
If you truly want to persue macro (and you seem to have an eye for it) I'd strongly suggest a 90-100mm macro lens. Manual focus is fine, AF tends to hunt and struggle with close focus anyway. My favorite is the M 100mm f/4.0, but I'm sure others will chime in with suggestions. The M is also inexpensive, about $100.00 USD.
Overall you did a good job for a first scenic outing, but next time I'd bring a polarizer, tripod, macro lens and cable release. Also good lens hoods for any lens you have.
Hope you don't mind the critique'
Ron
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