Nice enough, but as someone already suggested, if you want surreal, don't worry about distortion and try it with a fisheye. And get in closer - in my minds eye (which sees all sorts of impossible things, remember!) I see a massive, distorted elevator looming on the left, taking up a good 2/3 of the frame, with a distant view occupying the rest to give you that contrast of huge, looming structure with otherwise featureless landscape.
One of the shots had bushes and a chainlink fence in the foreground - is there anything other than brambles, poisonous plants, snakes and biting insects keeping you from getting right up to the fence?
Seriously, getting up close enough to keep that out of the foreground and accepting the distortion might get you what you're after.
Try the channel mixer for B&W conversion - Godfrey over at dpreview posted a detailed guide to his workflow a while ago. Seems to work well. Do a search, if you can't find it, let me know, I must have a copy somewhere on my HD...
Julie