These are a pretty good shots, congrats.
However, the first one is underexposed (nothing a quick tweak with curves won't fix). Also, she is dead center in the image, which makes it a bit "static" in my eyes. Finally, there is a lot of empty space above her head; I think it would work better if it was framed closer to her, with the top of her head closer to the top of the image.
I really like the light in the 2nd one, but again she is too centered in the image, at least vertically, IMHO, with again too much empty space above her head.
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