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Lens: DAL 18-55 Camera: K-x Photo Location: Cheektowaga, NY 
Posted By: froggertwenty, 07-20-2010, 08:17 PM

Critique is very welcome
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07-21-2010, 01:14 AM   #2
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The first and the last shots are nice, but it's the second that does it for me. I think that one is just fantastic in all aspects. Great use of lines, and nice composition with the bike!

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07-21-2010, 08:00 AM   #3
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Whilst 1 and 3 have good composition, I don't feel them that much. I think it's because of the lack of people or objects that interact with people... Might be a bit hard to explain but that's just my opinion

Number 2 however, I quite like. Again nice composition and I feel more of an emotional response to this one. Like I'm expecting someone to walk up and ride off on the bike...
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07-21-2010, 04:25 PM   #4
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Thanks guys, i decided to go to a house i pass all the time and take some pictures during the "magical hour" and i have realized just how big of a difference that lighting makes on photos. The bike is actually my mode of transportation seeing i cant drive yet.


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