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Childhood bliss...even grass was fun. · 07:26 PM

First child photoshoot...ended up with a heat exhaustion for me and my second shooter

...was it worth it? Your opinions

**Ash** · 08-30-2010, 12:31 AM

Nice imagery - interesting choice of orientation.
The central composition in a wide landscape frame isn't bad, just different - I'd have had him more to the right of the frame, or cropped down to a more 3:2 frame for a change in arrangement.
The grass is a little oversaturated IMO, but this is a bright and lively portrait.
Hope you enjoyed the shoot.

D4rknezz · 08-30-2010, 06:17 AM

Thanks Ash

It usually bothers me when the subject is looking one direction and its not a rule of third composition, but this one strangely doesn't. I think maybe its just because the way he sits or something

I agree, the grass is a tad oversaturated - though I hope with the combination of soft pp, gives it a little of a dreamy childhood look...

not sure if I overshot it.

Thanks for commenting!

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08-30-2010, 12:31 AM	#2
Ash Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Toowoomba, Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,920	Nice imagery - interesting choice of orientation. The central composition in a wide landscape frame isn't bad, just different - I'd have had him more to the right of the frame, or cropped down to a more 3:2 frame for a change in arrangement. The grass is a little oversaturated IMO, but this is a bright and lively portrait. Hope you enjoyed the shoot.

08-30-2010, 06:17 AM	#3
D4rknezz Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 1,196 Original Poster	Thanks Ash It usually bothers me when the subject is looking one direction and its not a rule of third composition, but this one strangely doesn't. I think maybe its just because the way he sits or something I agree, the grass is a tad oversaturated - though I hope with the combination of soft pp, gives it a little of a dreamy childhood look... not sure if I overshot it. Thanks for commenting!