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Posted By: Dan1005, 09-05-2010, 08:03 AM

A shot of a flowerbed in the city center of Plymouth that I really enjoy looking at..


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09-05-2010, 02:00 PM   #2
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Very pretty flowers, but I don't think the focus is quite as good as it should have been. If you can, give it another try, and try moving back a little bit, you'll get a lot more detail from the bed.
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Hi Thanks for the feedback,
Yeah I noticed that its a bit soft in the top right only when I got it onto the larger screen.
Sadly I can't go back as I live in Slovakia so its not an easy commute, just have to find some other flowers to work with
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I just realised I actually uploaded the wrong photo.. this one is a bit better for focus...

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They look quite similar, and still not quite sharp enough.
The image is very high in contrast due to the harsh lighting and as a result has very oversaturated colours and burnt out highlights.
You could have focused in on one flower, or isolated a small group of them in an interesting formation/pattern, but as is it is messy with no clear subject and a disorganised composition.
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