Seems everyone prefers the contrast in #2. I've tried #1 with more contrast in the sky and it does help, except the dark sky starts to merge with the mountains. Even so, I'll have to follow through on it AND straighten the horizon. Not sure how I overlooked it being that far off.
roentarre - Not much grain in these (IMO). But worth trying out. Thanks for the idea.
vijerei -I'm glad you like the sky in #2. I fear some might find it overdone, but I like it too!
Ole - I hadn't thought about the tank in #1 pointing out of the frame. Maybe that's part of the "drama" in #2 (pointing in / keeping your eyes in). Great observation.
Marc - Thanks for the accolades and being the 1st to point out the tilted horizon in #1. I'm not too picky about 'rules', but it does seem out of place here.
Betsy - I think I'd have lost the nice mountains or the positioning of the hose on the ground if I'd stepped left. I guess this is a matter of missing the decisive moment as the cloud rolled past. I assume the dark staircase is the objectionable foreground element in #1. I agree it isn't adding much, but hard to keep out the pic except to get closer & use a shorter lens as in #2.
Thanks to the folks above. Anyone else have an opinion? I'd love to hear from you.
-Mark