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An evening · 10:55 AM

C&C please.

**DRabbit** · 05-20-2011, 11:16 AM

I like it, and I like your treatment of it. The motorcycle helmet makes it all the more interesting.

Kryosphinx · 05-20-2011, 03:01 PM

Sweet photo! I really like it.

Couple things:
1. I'm not sure about the fading on the left side. Seems a tad out of place considering the higher contrast found on the other side of the frame.
2. Doesn't look like evening to me... Maybe a different title?

Of course, I'm no pro, so it's just some impressions from a n00b. :P

yusuf · 05-20-2011, 10:35 PM

yes, I should have used a better title

thanks

axl · 05-21-2011, 05:27 AM

Originally posted by Kryosphinx

Sweet photo! I really like it.

Couple things:
1. I'm not sure about the fading on the left side. Seems a tad out of place considering the higher contrast found on the other side of the frame.
2. Doesn't look like evening to me... Maybe a different title?

Exactly what I think!
I like the shot but it doesn't evoke evening and the fading on the left side is bit too much IMO

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05-20-2011, 11:16 AM	#2
DRabbit Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Long Island, NY Photos: Gallery Posts: 593	I like it, and I like your treatment of it. The motorcycle helmet makes it all the more interesting.

05-20-2011, 03:01 PM	#3
Kryosphinx Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 129	Sweet photo! I really like it. Couple things: 1. I'm not sure about the fading on the left side. Seems a tad out of place considering the higher contrast found on the other side of the frame. 2. Doesn't look like evening to me... Maybe a different title? Of course, I'm no pro, so it's just some impressions from a n00b. :P

05-20-2011, 10:35 PM	#4
yusuf Pentaxian Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Palo Alto, CA Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,497 Original Poster	yes, I should have used a better title thanks

05-21-2011, 05:27 AM	#5
axl Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Nove Zamky, Slovakia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 7,183	Originally posted by Kryosphinx Sweet photo! I really like it. Couple things: 1. I'm not sure about the fading on the left side. Seems a tad out of place considering the higher contrast found on the other side of the frame. 2. Doesn't look like evening to me... Maybe a different title? Exactly what I think! I like the shot but it doesn't evoke evening and the fading on the left side is bit too much IMO