here are some more shots with the pentax k100d using sigma lens....comments and critics are welcome

[rjburgos]

here is another one hope that you like it.....comments and critics are welcome

[Mike Cash]

They're all very nice. But #2 and #4 would have benefitted from either fill flash or light from a reflector. On #4 there is a considerable difference between the upper half of the photo and the lower half, with the brightness of the white dress and green grass being just exposed just fine and leaving the darker upper half of the photo somewhat underexposed. The tree being dark isn't a problem, but some reflected light on the model's face would have helped a lot.

[daacon]

Nice series - I really like #2 the gaze off to the side really makes that picture I think.

[codiac2600]

I like your first image and feel the pose is very nice, my only problem is the image seems soft and the blown white background compared to the almost bluish white in the foreground is a little distracting.

Image two seems too tighly cropped and you're chopping off the girl on the right too much.

Third image I totally agree with Mike that the dark foreground vs bright background is a bit distracting, I like the look of the image, but suffers from not havig a little fill flash.

The last image is a lot like the third image in that it needs a little more fill flash or just moved into the shade. It seems you shoot on really bright days and it would be better to either hide in the shade and try again or wait for overcast days for better image quality.

[rjburgos]

thanks for the comments, yup i was having a bit of a problem with the bright sunlight it was taken during high noon and should have opted for a reflector or fill flash