[Schraubstock]

Hi
Don, I like the humorous motive and it is framed O.K., (Would make a nice birthday card for a kid) but you have done it again, you overcooked the colours and the highlights are a bit washed out.

Am I allowed to say only good things here and therefore am I out of order by speaking my mind? (Perhaps you could post more in the critique section, then I would feel less guilty with my ramblings).

Greetings

[Don From The Radio]

Hi
Don, I like the humorous motive and it is framed O.K., (Would make a nice birthday card for a kid) but you have done it again, you overcooked the colours and the highlights are a bit washed out.

Am I allowed to say only good things here and therefore am I out of order by speaking my mind? (Perhaps you could post more in the critique section, then I would feel less guilty with my ramblings).

Greetings

No need to feel guilty at all! This one was just taken for fun, so I didn't really need a formal critique. As for the saturation, it's a tough thing for me to judge at this point, so I'm always open for suggestions. With almost everything being yellow or green, it's a tough one for me to get right.

[dcmsox2004]

he looks sooo sad..... imprisoned through no fault of his own.... dave m

[Don From The Radio]

I think this looks much better...



At least I think so.

[Schraubstock]

I think this looks much better...



At least I think so.

Stimulated by my impoverished ramblings ?
I think you are on the right track. Best wishes

and greetings from Melbourne