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Posted By: Ole, 09-17-2006, 10:28 AM

I like the way this pacth of green field shines trhough the trees. Comments?



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Very nice composition, but too bright at the top for my taste. I'd either crop it or darken the top with shadow/highlight in Photoshop.

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Here are two concept edits- it would have helped to have the pic in higer resolution, but I guess this works:





The first is just cropped, which the second has gone trough manual level and shadow/highlight edits.
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I like that tighter crop!

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Yeah I think cutting out the sky makes the trees appear more dense and so the opening is more "surprising".
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