Thank you for the constructive comments And. I agree with you on the first shot of my daughter. I will redo the crop to include the upper tip of her head. With only getting her to sit for 2 shots I did not have much time to pull a rabbit out of my hat - ha ha. I would have liked to get more of a soft linear light fade starting from just off center line of her face. It is an excellent point about cropping to remember finial printing sizes for fames, etc. Thank you for that. I was too "focused on the image.
I was fairly happy with the results with my wife. I wanted to create an air of something leading the photo. I find it intriguing when I see a photo and it appears that the subject knows something that we don't know, or we get a glimpse into something about the subject that is bigger than first noticed. Looking at old glamour photographs from the 40's and 50's you get a sense that the models were indifferent to the photographer and viewing audience. Not in an insulting or offensive way, just more like they were preoccupied somehow.
ChrisM my lens is manual. There is no "A" position on the aperature ring. Focusing is thumb and index finger
I know I will get some raised eyebrows from saying this, but I tend to like the older lenses and glass. This 50mm lens is surprisingly heavy, and built like a tank. I was lucky to find it used in pristine condition. It has become my favorite lens.