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Posted By: benny_h_z, 05-21-2012, 02:16 PM

FA77 is a really suitable for portrait shot, love it.
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A pleasing looking shot.Well done.--charliezap
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Quite ones are the ones to watch lol wayyyyy to cute too..... beautiful girl and bokeh !
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Nice shot, but I would process in one of two ways. Turn it from landscape to portrait by cropping the right, or tone down the highlights a little bit as the right side is too bright at both the top and bottom right corner.

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QuoteOriginally posted by benny_h_z Quote
FA77 is a really suitable for portrait shot, love it.
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Nice, dreamy shot.
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Stunning photo, very soft.
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Nice shot, but I would process in one of two ways. Turn it from landscape to portrait by cropping the right, or tone down the highlights a little bit as the right side is too bright at both the top and bottom right corner.
Thank you for your advice.
Feel shy, my English is not very good, you are the light than the dark can press a bit? And the right part is too empty, can cut a point is it right??

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Very soft portrait well done.
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It is a very nice capture. However, you might want to try to be a bit more careful about focusing correctly. Focus in this image is on the tree, not the model. Of course, I realize how difficult this is when people are moving.
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Beautiful girl. Crop some of the right hand side of the picture. She's still a beautiful girl.

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As others said; a very nice soft portrait of a beautiful girl. But the the overblown highlights on the right do bother me especially since the woman is looking directly in that direction.
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Benny...your English is better than my fluency in your language by a landslide. However, here is all you need to know...

That's a damn fine shot, just like it is! Lovely girl too.

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It is a very nice capture. However, you might want to try to be a bit more careful about focusing correctly. Focus in this image is on the tree, not the model. Of course, I realize how difficult this is when people are moving.
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Beautiful girl. Crop some of the right hand side of the picture. She's still a beautiful girl.

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Yes, this is.

QuoteOriginally posted by Fries Quote
As others said; a very nice soft portrait of a beautiful girl. But the the overblown highlights on the right do bother me especially since the woman is looking directly in that direction.
Thank you for your reviews

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Benny...your English is better than my fluency in your language by a landslide. However, here is all you need to know...

That's a damn fine shot, just like it is! Lovely girl too.

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Thank you very much you like it, I am glad that this is indeed a very lovely girl.
ps: My English should be grateful to Google Translate, haha​​.
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As others said; a very nice soft portrait of a beautiful girl. But the the overblown highlights on the right do bother me especially since the woman is looking directly in that direction.
A couple of people said that, but that and the bright exposure are exactly what gives the picture its sense of dreaminess. The total lack of focus to the right and sharp image of the girl provide a situating which puts attention on her and gives a sense of herstrongly looking to something. If it wee tightly cropped to her face it would look like just another petty girl picture.
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A couple of people said that, but that and the bright exposure are exactly what gives the picture its sense of dreaminess. The total lack of focus to the right and sharp image of the girl provide a situating which puts attention on her and gives a sense of herstrongly looking to something. If it wee tightly cropped to her face it would look like just another petty girl picture.
Do as you say, this picture is to express some dream feeling, as if she is dreaming of what.
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