Originally posted by kenafein It takes time getting used to MF(there is an indicator inside the viewfinder, a green dot, not the Red indicators, that indicates focus), the focus is off on 3 for sure. The white balance is off on the second shot and it would be nice to get some light on his eyes with either flash or a reflector(on all). You might be able to burn the eyes in post to bring back some of the detail. I don't think bringing up the shadows will be enough. Do you really have a 1:1.2 lens? Or is it a 1:2? Learn how to use Lightroom, or another editor, and shoot RAW.
You're off to a good start. Welcome to the forums.
Thanks
Will start shooting more RAW, know about the focus in the third, but I thought the photo itself was really cool. Tungsten in the third, kind of a beginner thing I guess, looked fun
The eyes was difficult, will improve. And yes, it is a 1:1.2 lens. Got a bunch of old lenses that my father used when he took pictures