Originally posted by rparmar I like the photo!
But I'd prefer the distracting lettering to be gone, and a tighter crop on the men themselves. Maintaining a 3:2 aspect works. And the arrow pointing to the bottles gets a heightened effect from being isolated from the rest of the sign. The fact that the top border of the sign is missing helps. And the held cigarette leads into the arrow.
The head beyond the window pops out more for me as well. And yes, I straightened it! Hope you like.
Yeah, definitely. It turns out nicer than it was originally shot
Thanks for that touch up. Less distracting and better executed.
Sometimes, it takes a bystander to point the obvious thing out