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Love in the mist · **3 Likes**

Please critique , I won't improve otherwise. Thanks

**eaglem** · 11-05-2014, 07:53 PM

Very nice indeed, good lighting and sharp focus and the colour is very subtle.

**jac** · 11-05-2014, 08:09 PM

Very lovely and subtle shot.

**arnold** · 11-05-2014, 08:19 PM

I like the clean setting, making for a good composition.

**Weevil** · 11-05-2014, 10:20 PM

Looks like a drawing ! I love the grain... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below...

phoenixvision · 11-05-2014, 10:28 PM

Very difficult to add anything to this photo it is such a unique capture and perspective, subtle excellent use of color, the background is very effective, the lighting is perfect...perhaps if you didnt already I would play with a whole series of framing options including diagonals...and experiment with perspective, but this is a real beauty...

cybertaff · 11-06-2014, 11:35 AM

Originally posted by Weevil

Looks like a drawing ! I love the grain... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below...

Me eaither they were in frame in the view finder honestly (am adverse to live view don't know why) but I'd agree it is the only llet down I have with this pic personally

**Weevil** · 11-07-2014, 12:21 AM

Originally posted by cybertaff

Me eaither they were in frame in the view finder honestly (am adverse to live view don't know why) but I'd agree it is the only llet down I have with this pic personally

Yeah that is just too bad when we realize that afterward... I learned that it is better take a bit wider and crop in PP than not able to do it .... especially with the K-3, there is enough resolution to allow this most of the times.

MD Optofonik · 11-07-2014, 12:36 AM

Originally posted by Weevil

... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below...

Exactly. Let the stalk be the only element existing the frame. It's a powerful, stark, composition used to frame a delicate beautiful subject. Contrast in both image and idea. It's worth shooting again to get the composition perfect.

**Weevil** · 11-07-2014, 12:45 AM

Originally posted by MD Optofonik

Exactly. Let the stalk be the only element existing the frame. It's a powerful, stark, composition used to frame a delicate beautiful subject. Contrast in both image and idea. It's worth shooting again to get the composition perfect.

Hopefully, the flower still exists !

robjmitchell · 11-07-2014, 02:59 AM

Terrific, sure you didn't photograph a drawing? Never though about doing high key flowers before!

cxdoo · 11-07-2014, 03:37 AM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by cybertaff

Please critique , I won't improve otherwise. Thanks

You'll have to post something else to get critique, this one is perfect.

cybertaff · 11-07-2014, 05:18 AM

Originally posted by robjmitchell

Terrific, sure you didn't photograph a drawing? Never though about doing high key flowers before!

Cheeky lol

Jean Poitiers · 11-07-2014, 08:19 AM

Originally posted by eaglem

Very nice indeed, good lighting and sharp focus and the colour is very subtle.

Agreed ... very well done. Bravo & TFS, J

**Scottnorwo** · 11-07-2014, 07:42 PM

I'd love to critic it, but I think you nailed it

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11-05-2014, 07:53 PM	#2
eaglem Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Perth Western Australia Photos: Gallery Posts: 43,167	Very nice indeed, good lighting and sharp focus and the colour is very subtle.

11-05-2014, 08:09 PM	#3
jac Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Clyde River, Nunavut, Canada Posts: 2,364	Very lovely and subtle shot.

11-05-2014, 08:19 PM	#4
arnold Site Supporter Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: Queensland Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,299	I like the clean setting, making for a good composition.

11-05-2014, 10:20 PM	#5
Weevil Site Supporter Join Date: May 2012 Location: Near Montréal, Québec Photos: Gallery Posts: 4,446	Looks like a drawing ! I love the grain... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below...

11-05-2014, 10:28 PM	#6
phoenixvision Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,458	Very difficult to add anything to this photo it is such a unique capture and perspective, subtle excellent use of color, the background is very effective, the lighting is perfect...perhaps if you didnt already I would play with a whole series of framing options including diagonals...and experiment with perspective, but this is a real beauty...

11-06-2014, 11:35 AM	#7
cybertaff Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: london Photos: Albums Posts: 93 Original Poster	Originally posted by Weevil Looks like a drawing ! I love the grain... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below... Me eaither they were in frame in the view finder honestly (am adverse to live view don't know why) but I'd agree it is the only llet down I have with this pic personally

11-07-2014, 12:21 AM	#8
Weevil Site Supporter Join Date: May 2012 Location: Near Montréal, Québec Photos: Gallery Posts: 4,446	Originally posted by cybertaff Me eaither they were in frame in the view finder honestly (am adverse to live view don't know why) but I'd agree it is the only llet down I have with this pic personally Yeah that is just too bad when we realize that afterward... I learned that it is better take a bit wider and crop in PP than not able to do it .... especially with the K-3, there is enough resolution to allow this most of the times.

11-07-2014, 12:36 AM	#9
MD Optofonik Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: California Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 962	Originally posted by Weevil ... but I would not cut (crop) the leaves below... Exactly. Let the stalk be the only element existing the frame. It's a powerful, stark, composition used to frame a delicate beautiful subject. Contrast in both image and idea. It's worth shooting again to get the composition perfect.

11-07-2014, 12:45 AM	#10
Weevil Site Supporter Join Date: May 2012 Location: Near Montréal, Québec Photos: Gallery Posts: 4,446	Originally posted by MD Optofonik Exactly. Let the stalk be the only element existing the frame. It's a powerful, stark, composition used to frame a delicate beautiful subject. Contrast in both image and idea. It's worth shooting again to get the composition perfect. Hopefully, the flower still exists !

11-07-2014, 02:59 AM	#11
robjmitchell Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Melbourne Aus Posts: 1,776	Terrific, sure you didn't photograph a drawing? Never though about doing high key flowers before!

11-07-2014, 03:37 AM - 1 Like	#12
cxdoo Pentaxian Join Date: Apr 2014 Location: Limassol, Cyprus Posts: 1,150	Originally posted by cybertaff Please critique , I won't improve otherwise. Thanks You'll have to post something else to get critique, this one is perfect.

11-07-2014, 05:18 AM	#13
cybertaff Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: london Photos: Albums Posts: 93 Original Poster	Originally posted by robjmitchell Terrific, sure you didn't photograph a drawing? Never though about doing high key flowers before! Cheeky lol

11-07-2014, 08:19 AM	#14
Jean Poitiers Pentaxian Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Lost in translation ... Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 18,076	Originally posted by eaglem Very nice indeed, good lighting and sharp focus and the colour is very subtle. Agreed ... very well done. Bravo & TFS, J

11-07-2014, 07:42 PM	#15
Scottnorwo Millionth Poster! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Stafford, New York Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,086	I'd love to critic it, but I think you nailed it

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