Cityscape Paris, Mars

Paris, Mars · 12:09 AM

Reprocessed with Topaz Clarity in Corel PaintShop Pro X7

bdery · 07-02-2015, 10:10 AM

the colours are rich and beautiful. Your composition is just slightly off-center, was there some physical constraint preventing you from perfectly centering the tower? Otherwise maybe go all the way and make sure it's clearly not centered.

GeoJerry · 07-02-2015, 06:38 PM

A very unusual shot of Paris!

**luftfluss** · 07-02-2015, 07:52 PM

Unusual and engaging colors, and a nice perspective. I agree with Bdery about centering the tower.

**Bruce Clark** · 07-02-2015, 09:58 PM

I like it, but I do take the point of centering, the tower.

**fs999** · 07-03-2015, 01:24 AM

Thanks all for your comments.
Centering won't do it. If you look at the palais de Chaillot behind the Eiffel tower, the tour Montparnasse isn't aligned with them.
That's why I slightly decentered.

Sliver-Surfer · 07-03-2015, 02:24 PM

I think a slight crop from the left will help

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**Sailor** · 07-03-2015, 03:24 PM

Wonderful, refreshingly different photo - remarkable job!

Jer

**fs999** · 07-06-2015, 06:34 AM

Originally posted by Sliver-Surfer

I think a slight crop from the left will help

Did you read my post above ? I find the bottom of the recentered photo disturbed, something seems to be false there...

Originally posted by Sailor

Wonderful, refreshingly different photo - remarkable job!

Thank you !

Sliver-Surfer · 07-06-2015, 09:08 AM

Originally posted by fs999

Did you read my post above ? I find the bottom of the recentered photo disturbed, something seems to be false there...

Yes I read your post. I guess I'm just OCD when it comes to composition. Sorry.

**fs999** · 07-06-2015, 11:30 AM

Originally posted by Sliver-Surfer

Yes I read your post. I guess I'm just OCD when it comes to composition. Sorry.

No problem ! Thank you for your posts !

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07-02-2015, 10:10 AM	#2
bdery Pentaxian Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Quebec city, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 9,357	the colours are rich and beautiful. Your composition is just slightly off-center, was there some physical constraint preventing you from perfectly centering the tower? Otherwise maybe go all the way and make sure it's clearly not centered.

07-02-2015, 06:38 PM	#3
GeoJerry Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: Santa Barbara, CA Photos: Gallery Posts: 5,158	A very unusual shot of Paris!

07-02-2015, 07:52 PM	#4
luftfluss Site Supporter Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: NJ Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 11,619	Unusual and engaging colors, and a nice perspective. I agree with Bdery about centering the tower.

07-02-2015, 09:58 PM	#5
Bruce Clark Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Ocean Grove, Victoria Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,458	I like it, but I do take the point of centering, the tower.

07-03-2015, 01:24 AM	#6
fs999 Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Luxembourg Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,638 Original Poster	Thanks all for your comments. Centering won't do it. If you look at the palais de Chaillot behind the Eiffel tower, the tour Montparnasse isn't aligned with them. That's why I slightly decentered.

07-03-2015, 03:24 PM	#8
Sailor Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Coastal Texas Photos: Gallery Posts: 26,205	Wonderful, refreshingly different photo - remarkable job! Jer

07-06-2015, 06:34 AM	#9
fs999 Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Luxembourg Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,638 Original Poster	Originally posted by Sliver-Surfer I think a slight crop from the left will help Did you read my post above ? I find the bottom of the recentered photo disturbed, something seems to be false there... Originally posted by Sailor Wonderful, refreshingly different photo - remarkable job! Thank you !

07-06-2015, 09:08 AM	#10
Sliver-Surfer Pentaxian Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 1,558	Originally posted by fs999 Did you read my post above ? I find the bottom of the recentered photo disturbed, something seems to be false there... Yes I read your post. I guess I'm just OCD when it comes to composition. Sorry.

07-06-2015, 11:30 AM	#11
fs999 Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Luxembourg Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,638 Original Poster	Originally posted by Sliver-Surfer Yes I read your post. I guess I'm just OCD when it comes to composition. Sorry. No problem ! Thank you for your posts !