Originally posted by alamo5000 black and white draws more attention to her face and all of the nuances
Hi
Please do not consider this, my reply, as a "put down", rather as an observation born out of years in photography.
I don't think you will successfully achieve this with a full size body image, either in B&W or colour. To draw attention to the face with all its whether beaten character you must (must is perhaps too strong a word) or rather ought to single out the face a bit more, namely in the truest sense of the word aim your attention to it.
Of course under the circumstances in which this photo was taken it is not possible, but if you take any picture with "face" in mind you would arrange controlled creative lighting to achieve this. However the light here appears to be good enough to get a pleasing result. (And you did)
If you still like to make the face the main attraction try cropping the picture to near portrait dimensions and make sure to retain enough of the chest to give the face some connectivity to the person which, in this case, is important.
Personally, I would not go out of my way making the face the main attraction, the image is nice the way it is. Don't forget it will always mean more to you than to anyone else no matter how well or badly it is taken. (And it is well taken)
Cheers
P.S. Am looking forward to see the colour version.