Jung girl Marianne

Jung girl Marianne · 03:38 PM

Lovely nice teen that wants to modell.. so we had a go yesterday.. Think it worked out pritty well

I hope you all vote on my picture every day to sunday..

if you want to vote on other pictures because you think they are better, I would respekt that

..

just click on the blue button to vote, you can do so each day.
https://lagring.online.no/sections/competition/view.php?id=14#3865

to close the vote window.. just klick the word "LUCK" at topp right. Then you will return to the pool.

the prise.. It's a 450D, that I hope to trade for strobes.

thank you all

Oh don't shoot me.. this is the last week before the final

rmtagg · 07-28-2008, 03:42 PM

Beautiful! Love the lighting and poses. what did you do for the lighting if you dont mind sharing??

devisor · 07-28-2008, 03:45 PM

Originally posted by rmtagg

Beautiful! Love the lighting and poses. what did you do for the lighting if you dont mind sharing??

2 vivitars in umbrellas, and one pentax 540fgz in snoot for rim.

Jimbo · 07-28-2008, 03:47 PM

Nice Work devisor... I too would like to know your lighting set up. Looks very natural. Good luck! JIMBO

rmtagg · 07-28-2008, 03:49 PM

Originally posted by devisor

2 vivitars in umbrellas, and one pentax 540fgz in snoot for rim.

Hm, can you translate this? Sorry, just very new to additional lighting and like a sponge to learn

devisor · 07-28-2008, 03:55 PM

well then, the best thing I can do for you.. is give you this link

learned everything there..

Strobist: Lighting 101

devisor · 07-28-2008, 04:05 PM

oh.. and I really like this one

**rparmar** · 07-28-2008, 04:21 PM

The photography is amazing... hats off to you as I wouldn't know how to do any of this fashion stuff.

But the poses are quite unnatural and don't work for me at all. Except #1, but even there the way the legs are crossed...

rmtagg · 07-28-2008, 04:32 PM

Originally posted by devisor

well then, the best thing I can do for you.. is give you this link

learned everything there..

Strobist: Lighting 101

OH!!! Thank you

Love that last pic you posted. I think that is my favorite so far

vievetrick · 07-28-2008, 06:20 PM

great work and good luck. The lighting in these is very good.

Damn Brit · 07-28-2008, 06:42 PM

Nice photography, nice lighting (although it seems to have made the background a bit 'flat', almost looks like a backdrop in a few of them), nice compositions and locations..
I think the model is a good looking girl but she needs more experience in front of the camera to feel more comfortable, the poses look a bit 'forced' to me.
I think if you can manage a few more sessions with her you will definitely see an improvement.
You're coming up with some good studio work and you have had some beautiful girls to work with (which certainly makes it easy to look at your photographs but, not always easy to critique, too much of a distraction).

Gary

devisor · 07-29-2008, 12:31 AM

Originally posted by Damn Brit

Nice photography, nice lighting (although it seems to have made the background a bit 'flat', almost looks like a backdrop in a few of them), nice compositions and locations..
I think the model is a good looking girl but she needs more experience in front of the camera to feel more comfortable, the poses look a bit 'forced' to me.
I think if you can manage a few more sessions with her you will definitely see an improvement.
You're coming up with some good studio work and you have had some beautiful girls to work with (which certainly makes it easy to look at your photographs but, not always easy to critique, too much of a distraction).

Gary

thx

.. thats why I need to win

so I can get stronger strobes, so I don't need to fake so much in pp.

keep voting all

Damn Brit · 07-29-2008, 12:40 AM

Originally posted by devisor

thx

.. thats why I need to win

so I can get stronger strobes, so I don't need to fake so much in pp.

keep voting all

Good luck, why don't you put the voting link in your signature, more people will act.

Gary

devisor · 07-29-2008, 01:02 AM

thank you..

and thx for the tip

ll_coffee_lP · 07-29-2008, 04:04 AM

Great shots devisor! The lighting is very, very good...wow!

As stated above, some of the poses do appear a bit stiff (not the one on your voting page on the left hand side though) and unnatural. A touch more natural expression on the model's face and body/limbs and a slight adjustment to the background's brightness (I suspect that you are using a telephoto due to the compression and it appears a tiny bit dark) - and your very stunning photos will be superb.

Fabulous work!

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rmtagg Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Warrington, PA Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,271	Beautiful! Love the lighting and poses. what did you do for the lighting if you dont mind sharing??

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devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470 Original Poster	Originally posted by rmtagg Beautiful! Love the lighting and poses. what did you do for the lighting if you dont mind sharing?? 2 vivitars in umbrellas, and one pentax 540fgz in snoot for rim.

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Jimbo Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Maple Ridge BC Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 11,368	Nice Work devisor... I too would like to know your lighting set up. Looks very natural. Good luck! JIMBO

07-28-2008, 03:49 PM	#5
rmtagg Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Warrington, PA Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,271	Originally posted by devisor 2 vivitars in umbrellas, and one pentax 540fgz in snoot for rim. Hm, can you translate this? Sorry, just very new to additional lighting and like a sponge to learn

07-28-2008, 03:55 PM	#6
devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470 Original Poster	well then, the best thing I can do for you.. is give you this link learned everything there.. Strobist: Lighting 101

07-28-2008, 04:05 PM	#7
devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470 Original Poster	oh.. and I really like this one

07-28-2008, 04:21 PM	#8
rparmar Site Supporter Join Date: Jan 2008 Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,819	The photography is amazing... hats off to you as I wouldn't know how to do any of this fashion stuff. But the poses are quite unnatural and don't work for me at all. Except #1, but even there the way the legs are crossed...

07-28-2008, 04:32 PM	#9
rmtagg Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Warrington, PA Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,271	Originally posted by devisor well then, the best thing I can do for you.. is give you this link learned everything there.. Strobist: Lighting 101 OH!!! Thank you Love that last pic you posted. I think that is my favorite so far

07-28-2008, 06:20 PM	#10
vievetrick Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Easthampton - Massachusetts - USA Photos: Gallery Posts: 5,183	great work and good luck. The lighting in these is very good.

07-28-2008, 06:42 PM	#11
Damn Brit Guest	Nice photography, nice lighting (although it seems to have made the background a bit 'flat', almost looks like a backdrop in a few of them), nice compositions and locations.. I think the model is a good looking girl but she needs more experience in front of the camera to feel more comfortable, the poses look a bit 'forced' to me. I think if you can manage a few more sessions with her you will definitely see an improvement. You're coming up with some good studio work and you have had some beautiful girls to work with (which certainly makes it easy to look at your photographs but, not always easy to critique, too much of a distraction). Gary

07-29-2008, 12:31 AM	#12
devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470 Original Poster	Originally posted by Damn Brit Nice photography, nice lighting (although it seems to have made the background a bit 'flat', almost looks like a backdrop in a few of them), nice compositions and locations.. I think the model is a good looking girl but she needs more experience in front of the camera to feel more comfortable, the poses look a bit 'forced' to me. I think if you can manage a few more sessions with her you will definitely see an improvement. You're coming up with some good studio work and you have had some beautiful girls to work with (which certainly makes it easy to look at your photographs but, not always easy to critique, too much of a distraction). Gary thx .. thats why I need to win so I can get stronger strobes, so I don't need to fake so much in pp. keep voting all

07-29-2008, 12:40 AM	#13
Damn Brit Guest	Originally posted by devisor thx .. thats why I need to win so I can get stronger strobes, so I don't need to fake so much in pp. keep voting all Good luck, why don't you put the voting link in your signature, more people will act. Gary

07-29-2008, 01:02 AM	#14
devisor Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Norway Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,470 Original Poster	thank you.. and thx for the tip

07-29-2008, 04:04 AM	#15
ll_coffee_lP Inactive Account Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 1,972	Great shots devisor! The lighting is very, very good...wow! As stated above, some of the poses do appear a bit stiff (not the one on your voting page on the left hand side though) and unnatural. A touch more natural expression on the model's face and body/limbs and a slight adjustment to the background's brightness (I suspect that you are using a telephoto due to the compression and it appears a tiny bit dark) - and your very stunning photos will be superb. Fabulous work! c[_]