Chris, after reading Alans post, I think we can get back on the same page again.
With hindsight, it would have been better if you had been upfront with what you were working with and your brief.
We are visual creatures and for me, if I look at shots of models, the one thing that has to work is how appealing the model is to my eyes. In your shots, she didn't look appealing to me. My criticism was based on that and the fact that you hadn't made her look her best.
Now things are more clear, you were shooting for PP in which case, you did your job perfectly and they are good shots.
If I had had that information up front, I would have been able to view the shots differently.
One question please
, how does that work with copyright? You take the images and then they are changed by PPers. When you're hired for this kind of shoot does the client own the copyright?
Thanks for your rationale Alan.
Gary