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julie and scooter · **1 Like**

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**eaglem** · 03-04-2018, 11:59 PM - **1 Like**

A pensive pose but I like it.

**Tonytee** · 03-05-2018, 08:45 PM

Excellent quality work here. The first photograph I find really intriguing. Many thanks.

TT

french · 03-06-2018, 05:13 AM

thank you very much tonytee and eaglem

**Kerrowdown** · 03-07-2018, 02:21 PM

Originally posted by french

julie and scooter

Good to see Julie again, thought she had gone on vacation... without you.

**aslyfox** · 03-07-2018, 02:27 PM

envious and jealous

of your skill

oculus · 03-07-2018, 02:30 PM

First image is vastly superior. The crop of the second image is a little wrong. Lighting looks good.

french · 03-08-2018, 11:57 PM

Originally posted by oculus

First image is vastly superior. The crop of the second image is a little wrong. Lighting looks good.

tank you kerrodown, aslyfox and oculus
Sorry but julie was in my luggage
Oculus:
Can you make me a proposal of crop with this angle of shooting?

oculus · 03-09-2018, 06:24 AM

Originally posted by french

Can you make me a proposal of crop with this angle of shooting?

I am always happy to offer my opinion, especially when it is solicited! There is too much space on the right side of the image. The bike's front tire needs more room in front of it. She should be centered, while the bike provides a diagonal from left to right that leads the eye where it ought to be led.

french · 03-09-2018, 11:53 PM

thank you oculus: a new version

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03-04-2018, 11:59 PM - 1 Like	#2
eaglem Site Supporter Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Perth Western Australia Photos: Gallery Posts: 43,167	A pensive pose but I like it.

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Tonytee Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2012 Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 21,544	Excellent quality work here. The first photograph I find really intriguing. Many thanks. TT

03-06-2018, 05:13 AM	#4
french Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 115 Original Poster	thank you very much tonytee and eaglem

03-07-2018, 02:21 PM	#5
Kerrowdown PEG Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Highlands of Scotland... "Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand" - William Blake Photos: Gallery Posts: 57,867	Originally posted by french julie and scooter Good to see Julie again, thought she had gone on vacation... without you.

03-07-2018, 02:27 PM	#6
aslyfox Seeker of Knowledge Join Date: Aug 2016 Location: Topeka, Kansas Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 24,583	envious and jealous of your skill

03-07-2018, 02:30 PM	#7
oculus Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Photos: Gallery Posts: 518	First image is vastly superior. The crop of the second image is a little wrong. Lighting looks good.

03-08-2018, 11:57 PM	#8
french Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 115 Original Poster	Originally posted by oculus First image is vastly superior. The crop of the second image is a little wrong. Lighting looks good. tank you kerrodown, aslyfox and oculus Sorry but julie was in my luggage Oculus: Can you make me a proposal of crop with this angle of shooting?

03-09-2018, 06:24 AM	#9
oculus Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Photos: Gallery Posts: 518	Originally posted by french Can you make me a proposal of crop with this angle of shooting? I am always happy to offer my opinion, especially when it is solicited! There is too much space on the right side of the image. The bike's front tire needs more room in front of it. She should be centered, while the bike provides a diagonal from left to right that leads the eye where it ought to be led.

03-09-2018, 11:53 PM	#10
french Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 115 Original Poster	thank you oculus: a new version

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