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Industrial Landscape · **6 Likes**

It is 84.72% and we have 5 days left, let post more! Give me your comment. What will you do to improve this or... anything, really ... anything

Background information:
I took one of my Airbnb's guess to the Factory area in my city. Showing him photographic worthy locations, and ofter casual night photographic tips and technics.
Most of my guest want to lean to shoot night photography and my trip, Industrial Landscape just happens to be the only Airbnb expreances in Tokyo area taking people to such location. [Feel free to let me know if you are interesting!

]

* I think I add a wrong Shutter speed, and I don't know how to fix it! it should be 25 sec.

**BigMackCam** · 07-24-2018, 04:38 PM - **1 Like**

It's a superb image. There's very little, if anything, I'd do to improve it.

The only thing I notice, that's a tiny bit distracting for me personally, is the vertical corner edge of the lower building section which doesn't seem entirely vertical compared to the rest of the image. That could be due to lens distortion, or possibly even an inaccuracy in the building itself, but I'd probably look to straighten that in post-processing.

But, really, that's extremely minor. As I said, it's superb

pakinjapan · 07-24-2018, 04:46 PM - **1 Like**

@BigMackCam thank you very much for the encouragement comments, and you nail it on the distrotion. I miss that part in post process and find it out after I posted on my instagram account which I usually post on IG first then copy its URL to post here. I though no one would see it, but you did!

I will be more careful when edit image next time.

reh321 · 07-24-2018, 05:22 PM - **1 Like**

Originally posted by pakinjapan

It is 84.72% and we have 5 days left, let post more! Give me your comment. What will you do to improve this or... anything, really ... anything

Background information:
I took one of my Airbnb's guess to the Factory area in my city. Showing him photographic worthy locations, and ofter casual night photographic tips and technics.
Most of my guest want to lean to shoot night photography and my trip, Industrial Landscape just happens to be the only Airbnb expreances in Tokyo area taking people to such location. [Feel free to let me know if you are interesting!

]

* I think I add a wrong Shutter speed, and I don't know how to fix it! it should be 25 sec.

I think this is a fine photo.

I 'm not very worried about post volume now, because we're through 83.87% of the month, so we're ahead of schedule.

johnyates · 07-24-2018, 08:29 PM - **1 Like**

I really like this photo! Well done!

siriru · 07-24-2018, 08:57 PM - **1 Like**

I love it, it's like it comes from a video game!

JHfwp · 07-24-2018, 09:59 PM - **1 Like**

Great photo.

Staubach · 07-25-2018, 09:16 AM - **1 Like**

Looks almost like science fiction artwork

**swip** · 07-25-2018, 11:41 AM - **1 Like**

A very beautiful picture of a highly non-photogenic subject.

pakinjapan · 07-25-2018, 04:19 PM

Thank you every one for all the comments

alaricxyz · 07-29-2018, 08:05 PM - **1 Like**

Nice composition of contrasting color temperature. Very sci-fi-esque too.

**manishved** · 07-29-2018, 08:57 PM - **1 Like**

Awesome pic - looks straight out of a Star wars movie

pakinjapan · 07-29-2018, 09:03 PM

@alaricxyz , @manishved It was taken on Tatooine.

ignath · 07-30-2018, 08:45 AM - **1 Like**

extraordinary urbanscape! i can easy see it as japanese noise music LP cover

Kuzma · 07-30-2018, 11:00 AM - **1 Like**

Nice work with color!

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07-24-2018, 04:38 PM - 1 Like	#2
BigMackCam Digitiser of Film Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: North East of England Posts: 20,697	It's a superb image. There's very little, if anything, I'd do to improve it. The only thing I notice, that's a tiny bit distracting for me personally, is the vertical corner edge of the lower building section which doesn't seem entirely vertical compared to the rest of the image. That could be due to lens distortion, or possibly even an inaccuracy in the building itself, but I'd probably look to straighten that in post-processing. But, really, that's extremely minor. As I said, it's superb

07-24-2018, 04:46 PM - 1 Like	#3
pakinjapan Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Tokyo Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,041 Original Poster	@BigMackCam thank you very much for the encouragement comments, and you nail it on the distrotion. I miss that part in post process and find it out after I posted on my instagram account which I usually post on IG first then copy its URL to post here. I though no one would see it, but you did! I will be more careful when edit image next time.

07-24-2018, 05:22 PM - 1 Like	#4
reh321 Pentaxian Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: South Bend, IN, USA Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 23,185	Originally posted by pakinjapan It is 84.72% and we have 5 days left, let post more! Give me your comment. What will you do to improve this or... anything, really ... anything Background information: I took one of my Airbnb's guess to the Factory area in my city. Showing him photographic worthy locations, and ofter casual night photographic tips and technics. Most of my guest want to lean to shoot night photography and my trip, Industrial Landscape just happens to be the only Airbnb expreances in Tokyo area taking people to such location. [Feel free to let me know if you are interesting! ] * I think I add a wrong Shutter speed, and I don't know how to fix it! it should be 25 sec. I think this is a fine photo. I 'm not very worried about post volume now, because we're through 83.87% of the month, so we're ahead of schedule.

07-24-2018, 08:29 PM - 1 Like	#5
johnyates Pentaxian Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Saskatoon, SK Photos: Albums Posts: 1,345	I really like this photo! Well done!

07-24-2018, 08:57 PM - 1 Like	#6
siriru Junior Member Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 38	I love it, it's like it comes from a video game!

07-24-2018, 09:59 PM - 1 Like	#7
JHfwp Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 876	Great photo.

07-25-2018, 09:16 AM - 1 Like	#8
Staubach Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2016 Location: Upstate New York Posts: 401	Looks almost like science fiction artwork

07-25-2018, 11:41 AM - 1 Like	#9
swip Site Supporter Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Ottawa, Ontario Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,827	A very beautiful picture of a highly non-photogenic subject.

07-25-2018, 04:19 PM	#10
pakinjapan Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Tokyo Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,041 Original Poster	Thank you every one for all the comments

07-29-2018, 08:05 PM - 1 Like	#11
alaricxyz Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Laoag City Photos: Gallery Posts: 44	Nice composition of contrasting color temperature. Very sci-fi-esque too.

07-29-2018, 08:57 PM - 1 Like	#12
manishved Loyal Site Supporter Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: N. Calif Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,652	Awesome pic - looks straight out of a Star wars movie

07-29-2018, 09:03 PM	#13
pakinjapan Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Tokyo Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,041 Original Poster	@alaricxyz , @manishved It was taken on Tatooine.

07-30-2018, 08:45 AM - 1 Like	#14
ignath Pentaxian Join Date: May 2018 Location: Riga Posts: 1,759	extraordinary urbanscape! i can easy see it as japanese noise music LP cover

07-30-2018, 11:00 AM - 1 Like	#15
Kuzma Pentaxian Join Date: Aug 2015 Location: Moscow Posts: 514	Nice work with color!

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