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Industrial Landscape
Lens: DFA100 wr Camera: K3 Photo Location: Japan ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/25s Aperture: F11 
Posted By: pakinjapan, 07-24-2018, 04:10 PM

It is 84.72% and we have 5 days left, let post more! Give me your comment. What will you do to improve this or... anything, really ... anything

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I took one of my Airbnb's guess to the Factory area in my city. Showing him photographic worthy locations, and ofter casual night photographic tips and technics.
Most of my guest want to lean to shoot night photography and my trip, Industrial Landscape just happens to be the only Airbnb expreances in Tokyo area taking people to such location. [Feel free to let me know if you are interesting! ]

* I think I add a wrong Shutter speed, and I don't know how to fix it! it should be 25 sec.




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07-24-2018, 04:38 PM - 1 Like   #2
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It's a superb image. There's very little, if anything, I'd do to improve it.

The only thing I notice, that's a tiny bit distracting for me personally, is the vertical corner edge of the lower building section which doesn't seem entirely vertical compared to the rest of the image. That could be due to lens distortion, or possibly even an inaccuracy in the building itself, but I'd probably look to straighten that in post-processing.

But, really, that's extremely minor. As I said, it's superb
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@BigMackCam thank you very much for the encouragement comments, and you nail it on the distrotion. I miss that part in post process and find it out after I posted on my instagram account which I usually post on IG first then copy its URL to post here. I though no one would see it, but you did! I will be more careful when edit image next time.
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QuoteOriginally posted by pakinjapan Quote
It is 84.72% and we have 5 days left, let post more! Give me your comment. What will you do to improve this or... anything, really ... anything

Background information:
I took one of my Airbnb's guess to the Factory area in my city. Showing him photographic worthy locations, and ofter casual night photographic tips and technics.
Most of my guest want to lean to shoot night photography and my trip, Industrial Landscape just happens to be the only Airbnb expreances in Tokyo area taking people to such location. [Feel free to let me know if you are interesting! ]

* I think I add a wrong Shutter speed, and I don't know how to fix it! it should be 25 sec.
I think this is a fine photo.

I 'm not very worried about post volume now, because we're through 83.87% of the month, so we're ahead of schedule.

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I really like this photo! Well done!
07-24-2018, 08:57 PM - 1 Like   #6
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I love it, it's like it comes from a video game!
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Great photo.
07-25-2018, 09:16 AM - 1 Like   #8
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Looks almost like science fiction artwork

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A very beautiful picture of a highly non-photogenic subject.
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Thank you every one for all the comments
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Nice composition of contrasting color temperature. Very sci-fi-esque too.
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Awesome pic - looks straight out of a Star wars movie
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@alaricxyz , @manishved It was taken on Tatooine.
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extraordinary urbanscape! i can easy see it as japanese noise music LP cover
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Nice work with color!
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