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First post · 04:49 AM

First post here. Portrait of girl with K10D + tamron 70-300. Lots of post-processing.

Suggestions are welcome.

vievetrick · 09-17-2008, 05:15 AM

great series. I have nothing to add to what you have done as I think they are great just the way they are.

gawan · 09-17-2008, 05:28 AM

Welcome to the forum, atipon! Nice series of a very pretty girl!

Jimbo · 09-17-2008, 06:12 AM

Welcome the the forum.. Beautiful youg lady. JIMBO

OrenMc · 09-17-2008, 06:58 AM

Welcome, looks like your off to a great start to me.

**xs400** · 09-17-2008, 07:27 AM

Great shots of a pretty girl. Nicely done.

MrA · 09-17-2008, 07:48 AM

Nice pictures. Although, I can't decide if #3 is a fraction overexposed (see the nose / upper cheeks) or not.

sawtooth235 · 09-17-2008, 08:46 AM

Atipon,

Welcome to the forum! Great first post!

Beautiful model, good composition, and nice choice of background.

The only suggestion I might make is to darken the backgound of #s 1 & 3 a bit to make the model really "POP" out at you more.

Ray

RoxnDox · 09-17-2008, 11:36 AM

The glittery bits on her eyelashes were kind of distracting, but you really captured great expressions in all 3. It's much nicer to see a model actually smiling and enjoying herself instead of looking all pouty and serious as so many do...

Jim

Damn Brit · 09-17-2008, 06:55 PM

Nice work, welcome to the forum.

Taff · 09-17-2008, 07:12 PM

great and welcome

Outofocus · 09-18-2008, 02:35 PM

Those are great pix!! If I were to change anything, I would crop away some of the backround to the left of the model in #3 . Right now, to me, she seems rather "crowded" to the right side of the picture. Just a thought from a fellow newbie to the forum.

**Douglas_of_Sweden** · 09-18-2008, 03:53 PM

Very well composed, especially 1 and 3. Nothing wrong with the exposure either, if you ask me, but it may depend on what screen people look at.

atipon · 09-18-2008, 09:06 PM

For the exposure, I think #3 is a bit overexpose too.

Any way, Thank you all for your comments and warm welcome.
I will keep posting pretty girl pictures here.

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atipon Inactive Account Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Bangkok, Thailand Posts: 3 Original Poster	For the exposure, I think #3 is a bit overexpose too. Any way, Thank you all for your comments and warm welcome. I will keep posting pretty girl pictures here.