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Posted By: atipon, 09-17-2008, 04:49 AM

First post here. Portrait of girl with K10D + tamron 70-300. Lots of post-processing.
Suggestions are welcome.

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09-17-2008, 05:15 AM   #2
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great series. I have nothing to add to what you have done as I think they are great just the way they are.
09-17-2008, 05:28 AM   #3
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Welcome to the forum, atipon! Nice series of a very pretty girl!
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Welcome the the forum.. Beautiful youg lady. JIMBO

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Welcome, looks like your off to a great start to me.
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Great shots of a pretty girl. Nicely done.
09-17-2008, 07:48 AM   #7
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Nice pictures. Although, I can't decide if #3 is a fraction overexposed (see the nose / upper cheeks) or not.
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Atipon,

Welcome to the forum! Great first post!

Beautiful model, good composition, and nice choice of background.

The only suggestion I might make is to darken the backgound of #s 1 & 3 a bit to make the model really "POP" out at you more.

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The glittery bits on her eyelashes were kind of distracting, but you really captured great expressions in all 3. It's much nicer to see a model actually smiling and enjoying herself instead of looking all pouty and serious as so many do...

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Nice work, welcome to the forum.
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great and welcome
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Those are great pix!! If I were to change anything, I would crop away some of the backround to the left of the model in #3 . Right now, to me, she seems rather "crowded" to the right side of the picture. Just a thought from a fellow newbie to the forum.
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Very well composed, especially 1 and 3. Nothing wrong with the exposure either, if you ask me, but it may depend on what screen people look at.
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For the exposure, I think #3 is a bit overexpose too.

Any way, Thank you all for your comments and warm welcome.
I will keep posting pretty girl pictures here.
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