Originally posted by niblue I like it, but think I might like it more in B&W.
X 2. It would be interesting to see this photograph in B+W. It might increase the gritty factor, given that your objective is the 'homeless' issue. I would suggest the model wear a well worn, woollen hat ...something to cover her head...old baseball cap, etc. Her hair is too well maintained and too well cut for the homeless theme.
But other than that I think this is an excellent thematic photo....lighting, composition, the way the person is standing. Well done. You have put a lot of thought into this picture.