bw arcitecture

bw arcitecture · 03:50 PM

i try to shot in bw
let me know your opinion

vievetrick · 03-04-2007, 05:00 PM

I like it but looks a slight bit green on my monitor

clarenceclose · 03-04-2007, 08:17 PM

A lot to look at so cannot settle on your subject. See about cropping off the right side at the edge of the wall where the light fixture shadows end.

roentarre · 03-04-2007, 08:47 PM

Aggreed on Clarence. No theme and the mood is not there. ??Sepia might be better off

The top frame seemed to cut the top of the branches off a little

Alvin · 03-05-2007, 08:46 AM

Two different backgrounds take away from this shot. Have you tried a different angle?

tipentax38 · 03-05-2007, 01:51 PM

yes . this one for example?

Alvin · 03-05-2007, 01:53 PM

That second one is interesting. I like this one.

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03-05-2007, 01:51 PM	#6
tipentax38 Inactive Account Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: FRANCE Posts: 146 Original Poster	yes . this one for example? Last edited by tipentax38; 03-08-2007 at 08:20 AM.

03-04-2007, 05:00 PM	#2
vievetrick Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Easthampton - Massachusetts - USA Photos: Gallery Posts: 5,183	I like it but looks a slight bit green on my monitor

03-04-2007, 08:17 PM	#3
clarenceclose Veteran Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Pocatello, Idaho Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,506	A lot to look at so cannot settle on your subject. See about cropping off the right side at the edge of the wall where the light fixture shadows end.

03-04-2007, 08:47 PM	#4
roentarre Veteran Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 11,783	Aggreed on Clarence. No theme and the mood is not there. ??Sepia might be better off The top frame seemed to cut the top of the branches off a little

03-05-2007, 08:46 AM	#5
Alvin Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Mississauga, Ontario, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,517	Two different backgrounds take away from this shot. Have you tried a different angle?

03-05-2007, 01:53 PM	#7
Alvin Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Mississauga, Ontario, Canada Photos: Gallery Posts: 2,517	That second one is interesting. I like this one.

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