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"The people telling you that this is an awesome pleasing image are not doing you any favors." @LightSpeed: Nobody, and especially myself, has come anywhere near using the word "awesome" or any of its synonyms. Flaws have been acknowledged, both by myself and others, not the least being the eyes are out of focus. At the time of taking the shot I thought I was aiming at the front of the face - but obviously not. It was very annoying to find I had the focus behind the head. This is where a tripod might have helped, as the dragonfly was co-operating and staying in position for quite a while (a slight breeze blew the blade of grass he was on around a bit, but.......). I leaned over, kneeled, and eventually even sat on the ground, knees up, elbows on knees, trying to still the wavering image in the viewfinder. But at 76, with focal length at 300mm and being less than 2 feet from the subject - well, I obviously I still missed it. And I know it.
I read what you wrote about the other lens and tripod being in the back of the car, but that has nothing to do with the framing. Now, here's where your approach to "commenting" fails: you have implied a general criticism of the quality of the photography in your first comment, but no specifics. Now, framing - but what framing, of the final crop,displayed here, or the original image (accessible by clicking on the image here)? But regardless of which, to imply poor framing, without saying where the framing is poor or how it could be adjusted, or how it should have been - not useful, nor constructive. I have seen other posters have criticised framing of this or that photo, but in general they have included what they feel should have been included or excluded, or suggested the pic could have better by being taken at a different angle. Don't get me wrong, I am not taking any offence here - but I am pointing out why, in my view, your approach to commenting comes across as aggressive and non-constructive, rather than sincere and helpful. As opposed to the comments by Eaglem, Apet-Sure, and Toddk who have all suggested some PP could reduce some noise, or have pointed out (what I already knew) re the eyes being out of focus. And Apet-Sure has helped by agreeing with me that (if I had been paying attention to the viewfinder info) I might have got a better result with a slower shutter speed and a smaller aperture (addressing the depth of field issue). But all you have said is, essentially, this is not an awesome picture, and the framing is poor. (Perhaps you see the problem with the framing as being self-evident and does not need explaining - but that is exactly where you go wrong in you approach to commenting. A negative comment without explanation can be seen as aggressive, unfriendly, destructive. I am not taking it that way, but that is the way this kind of commenting will be perceived.
Again, I emphasize, I am not taking offence, I am not angry or cheesed off here, I am not saying you should not comment - of course you should. But you need to re-assess your approach. Typically you would not use a tripod while chasing these dragonflies down, anyway. Their vision is great and they detect movement very easily.As mentioned above, I moved around a lot, taking a number of shots from various positions. I could, in fact, have messed around with a tripod (carefully, of course). One thing I have learned in observing dragonflies while trying to photograph them is that, even if you do disturb them and they take off, if you wait in your original position, they will often return to the same small area, even the same leaf or twig. Which often allows extra minor adjustments to tripod etc while you wait for them to return. This approach has worked for me on a number of occasions. As far as post processing goes, it's great to get everything in camera when you can. Other times it's impossible.
Ansel Adams would have been THRILLED had someone walked up and given him a digital camera and a copy of adobe photoshop. Oh, P.S. - do not take my message the wrong wayYep, absolutely agree with this - and I am not technically challenged by computers, or computer software in general - spent my last 26 working years teaching people how to use computers, spreadsheets, word processors etc. Just have not got around to learning the technicalities of the host of tools available in photography processing software. And one last thing. Why would you need a 1:1 macro lens for this shot on something as large as a dragon fly? None of mine are shot with a 1:1 macro lens. It's not needed. Unless you want a big blob of in focus out of focus, very close up.Because, while I am impressed with the autofocus and sharpness of the Pentax 55-300mm PLM, I believe my Pentax DFA Macro SMC 100mm F2.8 WR lense would have been sharper, and certainly easier to use hand-hold than the 55-300mm extend out to 300mm. With a smaller image from the same distance, I would have had to crop a lot, but no prob there with the KP and 24mp. Focus stacking is nearly out of the question with these subjects. Unless you kill the animal, and some people do. If it means anything to you, mine were shot with a Tamron 70-200mm with a close focusing distance of 37.4 inches Yes, I wouldn't even attempt focus stacking on a live subject. Have never used it al all, on anything, anyway, but my (very shallow) understanding of it is that it is more appropriate to street-scapes, landscapes etc, where a number of shots with slightly different focus points, are overlaid on each other.
But my not have the tripod was not because of this - it was because, on such a small subject, it would have made it a lot easier to steady the camera, and the focal point.
(Before you or anyone pipes up here about manual focusing - I just cannot any longer manually focus with any reliability, except on some shorter, faster lens. Even with the Focus assist beep and hexagon, I just cannot nail it. Probably partly due to 76 year old eyes, and partly sorely missing the microprism focusing I used when first taking on photography with my them 1970-something Pentax K2 camera. Have managed it with some success with my Pentax-M 1:2.8 28mm, Pentax-M 1:4 50mm Macro, Pentax-M 1:2 85mm but hopeless with my Pentax M F4 200mm or my 3 modern lenses}.
So, my friend LightSpeed, to sum up - yes, I fumbled the focus. My cropping and/or framing may be off, but you have not explained in what way. There may be other flaws I have not referred to - but again, nor have you been specific or clear about that either. But if you are going to tell people their photography needs much improving (and I know mine does) you need to be specific about what you see as being not right, and what was needed to make it right.
But you also need to consider that not all of us here post because we think we have achieved a masterpiece - despite all the flaws with this pic (and other pics I have posted in these forums) I posted it because, even with the flaws acknowledged here, I still thought it might have some interest or appeal to some viewers because of its subject, and to discuss my experience in taking the shot, and to see if others agreed with me when I made comments about how I feel I might have done better if..... etc. Some of us just like looking at photographs of insects (or birds, or flowers, or whatever) provided they are at least mainly in focus.
Goodness - what a ramble.
@Lightspeed, one last time - I have not taken offence, I am not "pissed off" at you, I am not wishing you would stop commenting - you are as welcome as anybody else to comment. And again, I am very impressed by your Flight of the Dragon, second attempt post - amazing piece of photography!
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