A spontaneous Monday Night Show.

A spontaneous Monday Night Show. · 07:03 PM

Getting better focus and feeling more at ease.

C&C..Please.

Ole · 11-04-2008, 07:07 PM

Very nice exposure. #1 is my fav. I would, however, crop #1 from the left so that the object isn't in the bull's eye.

In #2 it would be nice with more space in front of the guitarplayer than behind.

Damn Brit · 11-04-2008, 07:09 PM

#3 is a real nice composition.
#1 nice lighting
#2 oh if he had been in the right half of the frame.

I can see you're improving.

pop4 · 11-04-2008, 07:14 PM

I've got the same thoughts as the above posters.
#1 is nice, best of the three
#2 would've been better with him on the right side, with more empty space in front of him
#3 doesn't do anything for me, but nice to see some (almost) square cropping

metroeloise · 11-04-2008, 09:34 PM

How's....This:

And this?

Bit more square (Well they are jazz players)! I like the square. Notice holding back on using them more...no more!

man.

pop4 · 11-05-2008, 07:59 PM

#1, I like the first version better; the blurry arm on the guy on the left just looks out of place
#2 I don't mind this closer crop, but now the bright thing at the bottom right, just behind the guitarist's back is distracting. The mic, I'm not sure; it's a little bit distracting but I thing it does add to the scene a bit

my 2c

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11-04-2008, 09:34 PM	#5
metroeloise Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Washington Posts: 958 Original Poster	Thank you all! How's....This: And this? Bit more square (Well they are jazz players)! I like the square. Notice holding back on using them more...no more! man.

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11-04-2008, 07:07 PM	#2
Ole Administrator Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 4,408	Very nice exposure. #1 is my fav. I would, however, crop #1 from the left so that the object isn't in the bull's eye. In #2 it would be nice with more space in front of the guitarplayer than behind.

11-04-2008, 07:09 PM	#3
Damn Brit Guest	#3 is a real nice composition. #1 nice lighting #2 oh if he had been in the right half of the frame. I can see you're improving.

11-04-2008, 07:14 PM	#4
pop4 Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: YMML Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,879	I've got the same thoughts as the above posters. #1 is nice, best of the three #2 would've been better with him on the right side, with more empty space in front of him #3 doesn't do anything for me, but nice to see some (almost) square cropping

11-05-2008, 07:59 PM	#6
pop4 Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: YMML Photos: Gallery Posts: 1,879	#1, I like the first version better; the blurry arm on the guy on the left just looks out of place #2 I don't mind this closer crop, but now the bright thing at the bottom right, just behind the guitarist's back is distracting. The mic, I'm not sure; it's a little bit distracting but I thing it does add to the scene a bit my 2c